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In the modern world, it is no longer be necessary to use animals and animal products for food, clothing and medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion based on your knowledge and experience.

#world #animals #products #food #medicine
It is certainly true that the
use
 of different types of species in human life is reduced in recent years. As long as
people
 are adopted alternatives as compared to depend on
animals
. I strongly agree with
this
 statement as well as all reasonable points will be elaborated on in the upcoming paragraphs along with my opinion.
To begin
 with, unfurling some valuable reasons of
this
 topic.
First
 and foremost, meat is the one of the richest
food
 in the world because it contains a high amount of protein but only eat
this
food
 are not good for individuals the reason behind it is that lots of
animals
 are killed to fulfil the demand of
food
 and it is a horrible thing for humanity and another point is that by eating animal
food
people
also
 face some health problems.
For example
, bird flu is a common disease in the world and many
people
todied
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died
 throw it. To see these Kinds of incidents
people
 change their eating habits and consume vegetables and fruits.
Furthermore
, humans
also
 make different kinds of things by the
use
animals
 like clothes and medicines in the past. Due to the
,
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 the
use
 of
animals
 is less as compared to past time. There are several ways to make clothes like chemical production of three and convert into clothing material and
use
 for sticking
also
 rather than
use
 leather for making clothes.
In addition
, medical industries
also
use
 natural products to make Madison's
such
 as Aurevadic and allopathic are
also
 used in hospitals. To capsule,
animals
 have
also
 the same feelings as humans have. So
use
 natural methods is beneficial for
people
 as well as it saves the animal kingdom.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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