In the modern world, it is no longer be necessary to use animals and animal products for food, clothing and medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion based on your knowledge and experience.

It is certainly true that the
use
of different types of species in human life is reduced in recent years. As long as
people
are adopted alternatives as compared to depend on
animals
. I strongly agree with
this
statement as well as all reasonable points will be elaborated on in the upcoming paragraphs along with my opinion.
To begin
with, unfurling some valuable reasons of
this
topic.
First
and foremost, meat is the one of the richest
food
in the world because it contains a high amount of protein but only eat
this
food
are not good for individuals the reason behind it is that lots of
animals
are killed to fulfil the demand of
food
and it is a horrible thing for humanity and another point is that by eating animal
food
people
also
face some health problems.
For example
, bird flu is a common disease in the world and many
people
todied
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died
throw it. To see these Kinds of incidents
people
change their eating habits and consume vegetables and fruits.
Furthermore
, humans
also
make different kinds of things by the
use
animals
like clothes and medicines in the past. Due to the
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the
use
of
animals
is less as compared to past time. There are several ways to make clothes like chemical production of three and convert into clothing material and
use
for sticking
also
rather than
use
leather for making clothes.
In addition
, medical industries
also
use
natural products to make Madison's
such
as Aurevadic and allopathic are
also
used in hospitals. To capsule,
animals
have
also
the same feelings as humans have. So
use
natural methods is beneficial for
people
as well as it saves the animal kingdom.
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