Everyone should be vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Vegetarians have satisfactory immunity despite them not feeding on flesh.
Therefore
, it is not compulsory to feed on flesh to have a balanced diet.
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meat
. Vegetables are affordable and easily available. Use synonyms
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people
acquire communicable diseases. Use synonyms
Therefore
, for a healthy society and free from communicable diseases being a vegetarian would be a better option.
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people
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vegetarian meals which are digested very fast making someone desire to feed frequently. Add the comma(s)
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thus
vegetarians are not well represented. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
meat
has other merits when accompanied by other meals apart from just having a balanced diet.
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feed
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facilitate
immunity in our body.Change the verb form
facilitates
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