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Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. As many as tow thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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There is no doubt that the younger generation is consuming unhealthy cooking as
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consequence kids are becoming obese. The education system has
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 in charge of maintaining school kid's cuisine intake.
Although
, academic institutions play a strong role in the development of our youth
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I believe that collaborative efforts of parents and schools can ameliorate the situation and I shall elucidate my viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs. On one hand, Due to
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 availability of fast foodstuff, ordering a meal have become effortless for the students.
This
 is an issue because eating
unrequired
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snack
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 can produce extra fat which leads to obesity.
For example
, I have seen crowds using their mobile phones and online fare applications to place an order.One
such
 example is Zomato. In Zomato, we can simply search for a specific place and add them to
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 and place an order.
Moreover
, these applications can deliver food quickly without wasting customer's time. Due to
this
, the youngsters are more attracted to
this
 software. Now, in
this
 case, schools can not stop them from accessing
this
 software. I believe that parents can restrict their children from handling mobile phones for
this
 purpose.
On the other hand
, whenever the teenagers are in the universities, at that time the higher authorities can ensure that they are not consuming insalubrious aliments.
For instance
, Few crowds prefer to have snacks in between the breaks. It becomes habitual to them to consume edibles. As a solution, the learning centres can provide foodstuff to learners so that they won't buy anything else during breaks. In conclusion, schools, parents, and the respective individual should take care of their intake habits.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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