At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage?

It is undeniable that the world at the present has had changed from

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society

into

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community

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technology to improve the birth rate. In that case, some countries have a dramatic increase

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the young adult populations, while the

number

of older persons is decreasing from the past. From my point of view,

although

younger – aged

society

has often more benefits to the public, it offers some drawbacks and can present some issues to the

community

. On the one hand, one of the positive impacts of having the young

adults

rather than the older is that social structure is transformed from

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society

into urban

society

and the industrial

community

which has a lot of the

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technology for the use.

For example

, many younger

adults

are often using some

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technologies to improve their skills

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education and career, and they use the

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technology to keep in touch with their family or friends.

Additionally

,

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system of the

country

will be moved fast by

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adults

because they are the positive men power of the

country

.

In other words

, the large

number

of

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adults

can cause more workers and higher productivity which can lead to

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growth of the wealthy nations, and many

people

think that having a lot of young

adults

can lead to

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society

.

On the other hand

, some

people

argue that younger – aged

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can cause

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negative effects to the

community

because younger

adults

are often using many resources

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, energy and knowledge rather than the older

people

, as the result, it can lead to the resources competition issue in the land.

Furthermore

, having many young

adults

can be said that the death proportion rather than the birth proportion, resulting from the medical system is a

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to prevent

people

from sickness.

For instance

, Niger

country

has the maximum

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children death rate after birth due to the medical term are unsuccessful. In conclusion, I strongly believe that having

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younger

adults

will have both

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positive impacts and

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the public due to they can drive the economy of their

country

, but they may cause some serious problems.

Therefore

, it seems to me that the advantages of

this

topic outweigh the disadvantages.