The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

In today’s
generation
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we observe that many have a monotonous, single
career
and focus on a specific
area
of speciality whereas a few try to have multiple careers with different
skills
. Having
one
profession is deemed to be old fashioned and engaging in more than
one
occupation is pinned as the emerging trend. The essay formulated below talks about both of these approaches.
Lastly
, it provides my viewpoint with the related arguments. From early days we are being taught that a person should be focused and trained to have a specific skill set as it is the norm. So most people are comfortable engaging in
one
profession where they know the inside out. These individuals master the
skills
of a particular
area
through education
such
as by following a postgraduate degree or by merely through experience.
As a result
, they are able to go higher up in their careers by becoming specialists in a certain domain. The latest trend
that is
observed by many is that they experiment by involving in more than
one
occupation where the required
skills
can be miles apart. At
first
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an individual would study and qualify in a distinct sector of interest. After which the person would work in the same sector for some time and after it becomes boring and uninteresting
then
they would look at other
career
options available. After selecting another
career
then
these persons would study
further
in that
area
.
Likewise
, these individuals have
skills
and experience in working
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a number of different professions.
This
will be both challenging and interesting. In conclusion, I prefer having a single
career
where I can excel and expertise myself in a specific
area
of interest and grow in my
career
as opposed to having several specialities. The path an individual needs to take purely depends on what they want to pursue and their interests.
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