Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

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number of crimes nowadays are increasing across the world,

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not less proportion of them are from youth crimes. There are many contributing factors behind

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deteriorating situation.

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essay will outline them along with the possible remedies to mitigate

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problem. A growing trend of

crime

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can be caused by many significant reasons, the

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and foremost of which is

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poverty. In developing countries, many people have insufficient

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to raise themselves and their families.

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, the possible exit of them is likely to commit a

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like

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a robbery

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or shoplifting for acquiring some

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or food to sustain their life. Not only

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, but poverty could

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lead to a lack of education which is one of

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factor

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other word, if they had no

money

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, they wouldn’t have an opportunity to attend educational

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as well.

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might be the major root of juvenile delinquency because children are not taught appropriately whether what is right or wrong. Despite many causes, there are several effective methods to help alleviate

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problem. The most important remedy is the duty of the government to spend more

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subsidizing

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educational development. They should perhaps establish and distribute more schools and universities to

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the countryside

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the government

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to do

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, not only

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rates would decrease, but

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the number of efficient workers would proliferate around the country.

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, another possible solution is to impose more severe and more proper punishment simultaneously, meaning that use more aggressive penalty for

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crime

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as murder or drug abuse, meanwhile for youngster criminal they should receive more lenient penalty

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as community service for their rehabilitation. In conclusion, the origin of rising crimes seems to stem from poverty and a lack of education,

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nevertheless

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some sensible movements from the government could lessen

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adverse circumstance.