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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #choices
In today's time, there is a belief that individuals are provided with a range of
choices
 in various fields of life. I agree with
this
 statement. To explain it
further
, I will be expanding on my point of view as well as opposite perspectives in
this
 essay. On the one hand, it can be said that
choices
 make a person indecisive but in a world that revolves around consumerism, companies will not survive unless they provide a range of
choices
 to their customers. Today, individuals can be seen making decisions from the time they get out of bed till the end of the day when they lay back down to relax and destress.
For instance
, from the choice of clothes to wear to work and even what to eat, individuals are surrounded by
choices
.
On the other hand
, others think that choice is the spice of life. If
man
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 is not provided with
choices
, they would
grt
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get
got
bored
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be bored
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 wearing the same clothes each day, using the same perfume, eating the same food or going to the same restaurant
everytime
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. If there would not be
choices
, man would lead a
mundance
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mundane
 everyday routine without any new experiences to enjoy or witness. In
conlusion
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conclusion
, I agree that people are being given a number of
choices
 today, but without these
choices
, people would just lead a dull and boring life. It is
also
 a good idea to have these
choices
especially
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 for companies and institutions to survive in
this
ever growing
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 world of consumerism.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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