Everyone should be vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Vegetarians have satisfactory immunity despite them never feeding on flesh.
Therefore
, it is not compulsory to feed on flesh to have a balanced diet.
To commence with, vegetarian feeds on all food component
apart from the animal protein Fix the agreement mistake
components
hence
there are other options of feeding on plant protein and thus
achieve the same nutritional value obtained from meat
. Vegetables are affordable and easily available. In, addition one kilogram of beans which is plant protein can be consumed by a large number of people
unlike I kilogram of meat
. For ,example research was done by Kenyatta Nation Hospital nutritional department indicates that only 5% of vegetarian people
acquire non-communicable diseases. Therefore
, for a society to be healthy and free from communicable diseases being a vegetarian would be a better option.
Secondly
, Meat
is tasty, attractive and makes people
feel full ,unlike vegetarian meals which are digested very fast making someone desire to feed frequently. On the other hand
, meat
has been associated with non-communicable diseases and the health worker advice the
society to eat just a portion Correct article usage
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which
is enough for the body requirement and with Correct pronoun usage
that
this
it is helpful in our body. For ,example ,almost 95% of the food available in entertainment joints is Add a comma
,this
meat
product and thus
vegetarians are not well represented. Therefore
, meat
has other merits when accompanied by other meals apart from just having a balanced diet.
To summarise, a healthy diet will lead to a healthy nation but how people
feed contribute a lot to the health of a human being. In a,
nutshell being healthy cannot be negotiated as it facilitates immunity in our body.Remove the comma
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