The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world ?

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growth of tourism industries
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English
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international
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but some other
people
believes it will result in the progress of only one
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instead
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assay
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I will explain the constructive and destructive ideas related to the statements and I strongly believe that we need both local and international
languages
.
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in the
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there are lakhs of local
languages
and dialect makes
the
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communication more complex.
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, using single
languages
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connect the culture and civilization Of
people
.
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, global
language
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commercial success because it will generate word into a single entity.
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, everyone can travel and explore different places and they can make
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relationship between local
people
with a recognised
language
.
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recently there are plenty of travellers and YouTube videos presenting the speciality of different countries all these bloggers using
English
as a medium of instruction and it
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people
's attitude towards the world. Reportedly, many
people
criticize that the rise of
English
talking
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the purity of vernacular subjects.
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, parents always like to teach their children global trends
instead
of their own
language
.
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, the culture and
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of the society not only impart new generation but
also
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Western lifestyle.
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, all
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local
languages
uphold the history and development of mankind went for
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forgetful thoughts. To illustrate
this
, in
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there are more than
thousand
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languages
and 22 official
languages
.
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the
first
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and every school
students
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should learn
this
. In conclusion, human beings need communication ,without
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no one can exist in
this
society .We need
English
for connecting
People
globally and at the same
time
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we should learn our own
language
because it is our identity of existence.
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