Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don't. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.

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many years. Some individuals take as an example sportsman. Some humans support that professional athletes

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nice role models for teenagers but others think that it is wrong. I strongly believe that

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of all, when a kid begins to grow up, she's going to need someone to guide her.

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, she's going to look for someone to idolize herself.

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idol, maybe an actor, maybe a singer or an athlete. If

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as Eda Erdem Dündar, she wants to be a professional volleyball player.

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, if she discovers that she is good at volleyball because of

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situation, she may be a very useful player for her country in the future. On

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basis, some people think that competitors are the best guide for infants.

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, some kids were born

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gravely disabled. For

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reason, they cannot do any kind of sports.

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situation, make them feel sad. When they look at television, People who play sports can get upset when they see it and think about why I'm like

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and think of severe depression.

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,

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case can be upset for their parents as they do not want their children to think like that. According to them, their children are the best actor or

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for them. To sum

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everything that has been stated so far, professional athletes can encourage many by showcasing their

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and long haul. From my point of view, Athletes who have always done good work and won numerous medals throughout their careers set a good example for

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