Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Animal annihilation is an alarming issue in our modern world.

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some suggested that all species deserve to be given equal security,

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others argued that the animal closest to extinction should be prioritized for protection. I will discuss both of the opinions from each group

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with the fact that all fauna should be protected. For a number of reasons, many people believe that putting efforts to save the entire kingdom could lead us to overpopulation

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which can be destructive for human survival. One cause is

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the natural behaviour and the survival instincts of wildlife that can be a life-risking threat to

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human

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. In many cases, animals wander into urban areas and cause property damage and human injury. To exemplify, over 1 million deer were killed as they

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on roads and highways

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the U.S.

national wildlife organization

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National Wildlife Organization

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On the other hand

, it is essential to put our attention to the other existing animals as they are the crucial component to the balance and stability of the ecosystem. In fact, the existence of diverse wildlife allows us to maintain the biodiversity of the environment. Without them, there will be a loophole in the ecological pyramid that will be disruptive to the whole ecosystem.

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, in the marine environment, if sharks, the dominant predator face extinction,

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tuna which are the secondary predator will be overpopulated. In conclusion,

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there are particular breeds of animal that require special protection given the lower numbers of their population

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, from my perspective, all animal deserves equal conservation

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their importance to our ecosystem.