Young people today spend too much money and time following fashion trends (clothing, tech). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Your child is going on a trip to another country for 3 days. School is looking for some parents who can join the trip and you decided to apply for the same. You are interested in going with trip. Write a letter to the head of the school and include: – Why you want to join the team – What you can do to assist – Queries related to the trip.

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Dear Sir/madam I am writing
this
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letter to express my interest in joining my son on the school
trip
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to China. The main reason I want to join
this
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tip is that I have a plan to go with my son, but it delayed many times. I want
this
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opportunity to complete my promise to him. Another reason is since I lived and worked in China for many years. I know their language, culture as well as useful information to help the team to have a good
trip
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. There are some things I can do for the team.
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, I can participate in creating the plan for trips. I can suggest what cities we should visit, these special activities we can do, and I am
also
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able to communicate in Chinese with local people during the
trip
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.
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, like other parents, I can take care of children
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as waking them up, preparing food and getting them on time.
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, I have two questions related to the
trip
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.
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, what will be the mode of transportation between the cities in China?
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, are we supposed to book the hotels ourselves or will it be done by the school administration? I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Huong
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