More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
It has been suggested that the topic for discussion, many
people
prefer to have children
in their late age
in the past time. As a matter of fact
, there are both advantages and disadvantages.
First
of all, to start with the disadvantages. I have read that from various books, blogs people
have got a certain age
for getting a child or children
. In fact
, if people
will enforce this
process later, maybe they can't
get a dreaming result in the future. As an example, both some scholars and doctors claim that more women can't
get children
just above 30 age
. On top of that, some diseases can establish at the high rate ages and this
situation won't
let to have got children
. Those situations are some of the disadvantages.
Secondly
, let us take a look at the advantages. In fact
, in this
day and age
the divorced situation increase than in the past time. I believe that people
who haven't
got children
are positive
condition.Because as a matter of Change preposition
in positive
fact
, children
's situations, moods and others can be affected by the divorce, moreover
these cases are unhealthy in children
for the future. Another factor, better chances, conditions should be established by married people
, they will become more mature than other time. As a pattern, duties, obligations will be realised better by people
and they will know each other.
To sum up, I believe strongly people
's children
must become when they feel prepared, mature and so on. Because nowadays technology and knowledge have been upgrading and children
's upbringing, education, characters are indispensable and crucial for the future. More illnesses can be solved by doctors.Submitted by aydin.quliyev2001 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite