In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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With the technological advancements in the world, in

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all vehicles may turn

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. The only

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travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. There are certain advantages and disadvantages of

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event. I believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

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, the software used in

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depends on artificial intelligence. At any given point

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there might be some limitations to

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software and if anything goes south it is the passengers' lives that are at risk.

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, in a country like India, the traffic conditions are unexpected. There can be busy roads and the software might not able to analyse

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intense traffic situations.

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adversely impacts the lives of

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travelling in

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affect the employments of many drivers. Many

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in developed, as well as developing countries, have their main profession as drivers. With the technology of

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all these jobs go useless and it adversely affects the economy of the countries.

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, In India there are lacs of cab drivers who carry

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on a daily basis in all the cities and all these jobs are at stake and their families are impacted by

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, if a person is driving a car, he can use his intelligence in detecting any upcoming accidents and can reduce the accident rates. To conclude, even though technological advancements are good for society and the economies of the world, these

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proved to be harmful to mankind. So we should not encourage

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technology as we are keeping our lives at stake with

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