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Some people believe that it is best for people to be honest at all times. Others, however, believe that it is occasionally necessary to lie. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There is an opinion that it is essential for a person to always say the truth.
Although
, individuals think that it is extra useful sometimes.
This
 essay will put light on bought of the thoughts.  On the one hand, it is better to lie in certain situations in order to survive or stay safe.
For example
, my brother had to said false information about the police arrived
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 a thief when he was trying to penetrate into his house. The gangster left the idea of damaging my sibling's health and property after those words.
As a result
, lie helped my relative to avoid the danger, so it was the best solution for
this
 case.
On the other hand
, telling your close friends or important people the wrong information about some things from time to time may change your reputation among them.
For instance
, I lied to my best friend about some unimportant stuff often , but when he determined that, he became less trustful to me and I feel so anxious about it now.
Therefore
 lying is not always a good option for us, especially when we are talking to our close person.
Consequently
, I think that we should think a lot before telling someone the truth or untruth, and imagine what
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 it will bring to us in the future. But, I have no doubt, that there is no reason
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 be honest all the time with everyone without considerable aim; remember, all words have consequences which could disappoint you.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • integrity
  • trustworthiness
  • credibility
  • transparency
  • accuracy
  • deception
  • ethical dilemmas
  • universal
  • moral absolutes
  • compassionate
  • sincerity
  • untruths
  • social harmony
  • cultural norms
  • situational factors
  • dishonesty
  • personal gain
  • relationships
  • consequences
  • context
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