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Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

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In today’s competent world, everyone wants to be ahead of one another
that is
 becoming the reason for upcoming generations to leave their homes to go for studies or work in developed
cities
. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the pros and cons of
this
 trend. On the one hand, to achieve better education, lifestyle and eventually relished future.
Firstly
, in the villages, there are not many educational centres with good management and teachers.
Secondly
, opportunities are not there to compete for, as compare to
cities
 where almost all the major companies are. These are the reasons which compel a person to migrate to developed areas. On the flip side, migration to
cities
 separate families,
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their health and soon.
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 and foremost, a person
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 to the
cities
 can not go back easily and their family members have to stay in the countryside as
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in the
cities
 it’s too expensive to live for
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 family. For
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data in the recent analysis
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 almost a person per family is living in the
cities
. To sum up, there are myriad advantages to have residents in the
cities
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 of cultural disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Migration
  • Urbanization
  • Educational institutions
  • Job prospects
  • Wages
  • Economic growth
  • Cultural exchange
  • Overpopulation
  • Cost of living
  • Rural depopulation
  • Social isolation
  • Traditional values
  • Personal growth
  • Recreational activities
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