Mrs Jones, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town , has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs. Barrett. In your letter Suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

Dear Jones, My name is John, full-time student at Brock University. I am writing
this
letter to hire me for your home. You advertised on the internet about a helper that you need for the upcoming summer. So, I am available to assist you in household chores like cleaning, cooking, and organizing.
Also
, I have a cooking certificate which I got from my back school.
In addition
,I love gardening and planting which would be easier for you. As you mentioned about two pets, I will take care. I really need
this
job to complete my basic needs like grocery, bus fairs and other expenses.
Moreover
, nowadays, workplaces are demanding work experience so, for gaining experience, and building confidence, I am looking for
this
opportunity. I can come at weekends after midday and on weekdays, from 4pm to 8pm. Make a call on 56699xxxxxx or send me a message. Waiting for a prompt response from your side regarding
this
request. Yours sincerely, John
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household chores
  • domestic tasks
  • organizing
  • gardening
  • experience
  • availability
  • commitments
  • gain experience
  • relationship
  • advertised
  • help in her home
  • build a relationship
  • free time
  • specific days
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