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In the Future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read anything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It is a known fact that communication
technology
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 has evolved to an astonishing level that can affect the way how people read. In fact, today world, with the advancement of
technology
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,
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has been able to replace many printed books and
newspapers
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, since not only the younger generation but
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 the adults who prefer a changing life
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 use e-books or e-
newspapers
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instead
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 of those printed on hard
papers
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. It can be imagined that printed reading materials will no longer be available in the unknown
future
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 due to the emerging dominance of e-communication. The essay will discuss and conclude by considering how people’s habits and dying natural resources have demanded
information
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technology
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 to develop in order to eliminate the printed
papers
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.
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, as
information
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technology
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 progresses towards an era with no printed material, it has created a reading experience similar to reading printed materials,
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, the features
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 as turning pages, bookmarks, writing and highlighting on sentences and many more that we can do with hard
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,
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 there are a decent number of e-books and
newspapers
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 to be read free of charge but most readable content is available upon payment or a paid subscription only.
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, due to fast access to millions of
information
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 with a click of one finger, people have been tending to prefer online reading rather than printed ones.
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, it is assumed that online reading will replace printed reading material in
future
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 but it may not be freely available.
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, saving trees has been of great concern because of the reduction of forest coverage on the Earth. As
papers
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 are made from trees, world leaders may take decisions to end the manufacturing of
papers
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 to save millions of trees, as
such
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 internet has undertaken to provide
information
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 through e-books and
newspapers
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. Apart from that, the ink used to print is harmful to human health and the natural environment too.
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, when the environment is considered on topmost priority, printed hard
papers
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 will be replaced in
future
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. To summarise, online reading is a fascinating way that gives immediate access to millions of
information
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, which may be limitedly available freely but is mostly available upon payment, as well as a way of saving the environment. After all, it is concluded and agreed that
papers
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 will no longer be printed in
future
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 and online reading will replace printed books and
newspapers
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. But it will mostly be available upon payment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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