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In the past, many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? Is this also true in your country?

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Strange as it may seem, nowadays, the importance of many manual
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 as making traditional costumes and repairing things, which used to be seen as a significant part of our traditional culture, has been gradually ignored by the public. It is not rare to see in China that an increasing number of
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 prefer to buy some clothes produced by modern machinery production
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 of those made by their parents or themselves.
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, when
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 are annoyed at their furniture or electric appliances broken, they might be more willing to ask repair companies for help rather than taking their own effort to deal with these problems. The reason for
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 fact lies in some changes in
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’s lifestyles and educational systems today. The fundamental reason is that
people
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 have less time to practice some manual
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. In fact, most citizens living in big modern cities, like Tokyo or Beijing, are always feeling stressed. It is common to see that a younger worker has to work overtime every weekend in order to acquire enough income, or many university students are forced to stay in the library for 12 hours every day so as to finish their thesis for graduation.
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, considering the much time cost of making clothes and repairing something broken, the activities have been gradually only seen as a waste of time by those who are living in urban areas.
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, a fact that many schools do not set up manual activities as a required course would have an impact on the disappearance of these activities. Most of the schools are always focusing on some courses that can help students develop their intellectual
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 and specific knowledge.
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 means that though many
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 are still interested in manual
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, their desire to train these
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 would be difficult to be satisfied with existing education systems. To summarize，the gradual disappearance of conventional manual
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 would be
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 widespread in Chinese society, which may be caused by the current situation of
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’s lifestyle and the educational institution in China.
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