Nowadays children are exposed to a
lot
of pressure from parents as they wish their child succeeds. Particularly, children are convinced that by trying hard, they will achieve any goal that they have. In
this
essay, I will examine what are the main benefits and potential risks of
this
approach of motivation.
It seems a wise approach to incentivize a child to
work
hard as it may contribute not only to the child’s future but
also
to the whole society.
First
of all,
such
stimulation yields good results during the career path of a child. By putting a
lot
of effort into solving tasks from the beginning, people tend to have greater diligence, responsibility, and perseverance than an average
person
. A worker,
for example
, who has all these skills is likely to have much more tasks quickly done and, later, to be promoted to high-level positions with a decent salary.
That is
a huge contribution to the fulfilling
life
of
this
person
.
Moreover
, others can
also
reap the benefits. While the community could suffer from an adverse disease or a virus, a hard worker could come up with an innovative solution to
this
problem promptly, as he concentrates on
this
issue all day long without bothering about distracting factors and is fully dedicated to his
work
.
A never-ending
work
,
however
, could pose a threat to mental health and personal
life
. It is obvious that people make mistakes and are not capable of doing all
work
with the best outcome. One failure could undermine the enthusiasm, and the chances to get back on track decreases every time.
Such
people usually struggle mentally as feel a
lot
of pressure and hope relied on them.
Consequently
, it leads to many disorders and mental illnesses like depression
that is
hard to battle.
In addition
, given all that the
person
misses during his
life
, he will face loneliness. Because of a lack of time clearly
person
does not have a chance to build a family, meet family and friends.
Thus
, while the
person
retires, he feels isolated and lonely as he did not devote enough time on personal
life
earlier.
In conclusion, when children are motivated to
work
a
lot
in order to attain impressive goals, it could bring a positive impact on everyone's
life
,
although
it has detrimental effects on the health of mind and families bond.