Some People Say The The Main Environmental Problem Of Our Time Is The Loss Of Particular Species Of Plants And Animals. Other say that there are more environmental problems. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.
A healthy
environment
is one of the reasons for the existing earth. Due to human negligence, various plants and animals are becoming extinct,causing a major effects
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a major effect
major effects
environment
. But, there is also
the other factor influencing environmental depletion. This
essay will juxtapose both these views and will finally
end with my opinion.
In this
21st century, the environmental problem is becoming a serious issue, resulting to
rise in global temperature. Change preposition
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Moreover
, a decrease in a
number of trees and an increase in Correct article usage
the
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the number
number of
pollution is the main problem, evolving through human behaviour. Correct quantifier usage
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For example
, Sindupalchowk,district
of Nepal, suffered from massive floods resulting in loss of family as well as their shelter.Since, Correct article usage
a district
people
were cutting down trees a few years back consequently
causing soil erosion, the disappearance of habitats and the occurrence of natural calamities.
Moreover
, people
are not realizing the fact that,
they are the ones playing a crucial role in environmental problems. Remove the comma
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Although
some side effects of the problem are,vanishing of plants and animals, but pollution is the major issue today's generation is dealing with. For instance
, research claims that,
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people
living near the
industrial areas are suffering more from Correct article usage
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a
diseases like asthma, heart disease etc through harmful gas emitting from factories.Pollution doesn't only affect Correct the article-noun agreement
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people
's lives,also
as a whole of the earth.Scientists have already found that there's a hole in Antarctica , because of global warming temperature.
I personally believe that,
many problems occurring in the Remove the comma
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environment
is not only due to the extinction of plants and animals but also
the other factors that are leading to environmental problems. To conclude, an awareness campaign should be held in various parts of the world,so that people
will be more cautious about the environment
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