You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir, It is with great interest, that

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will like to participate in the upcoming

workshop

happening in the

United

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kingdom. I am writing to you from Calgary, Canada.

Therefore

, I will be travelling down to attend the

workshop

. I will be pleased to have some information about the

workshop

In addition

, I will like to know the date of the

workshop

this

will enable me to plan my schedule and flight.

Also

, it will be of need to have the program of the event so as to help me read, research ahead of the

workshop

and familiarize myself with the topics.

Furthermore

, because I will be travelling down for the event, I will like to know If there are accommodations for guests and the cost implication. With

this

information, I will be able to make all necessary arrangements from here, and if possible place my booking for accommodation from here to avoid being scattered after getting to the place of the event. In conclusion, I will appreciate a positive response from you concerning all my areas of concern and questions which are; the date of the

workshop

, the program for the

workshop

, accommodation and its cost implication. I look forward to having a great time in the united kingdom and enjoying the seminar. Yours Faithfully, Mariam Abdul.

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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome culture differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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