Many small local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How does this effect local communities? How could this situation be improved?
Nowadays, globalization and industrialization have an immense
impact
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the national market. In Change preposition
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, national trade is dominated by the big company market and small Use synonyms
markets
unable to compete with them. In Use synonyms
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impact
on local Use synonyms
communities
as well as how a small market could improve Use synonyms
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situation
.
Chief among the impacts on local Use synonyms
communities
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farmers
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markets
would decrease as well as local Use synonyms
farmers
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that
markets
their crops. Use synonyms
For instance
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farmers
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because the price they get for their product will be much less than what they sell in small Remove the comma
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shops
or they must always provide Use synonyms
high quality
commodities throughout years. The solution to Add a hyphen
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this
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impact
is that the government must help empower local Use synonyms
farmers
. There are solutions, among the other things, they can give incentives to Use synonyms
farmers
to develop their fields and build a balance between the number of small local Use synonyms
shops
and supermarkets.
Another major Use synonyms
impact
on local Use synonyms
communities
is that traditional Use synonyms
markets
have become rare in the area. Use synonyms
As a result
, consumers must buy commodities Linking Words
which
are slightly more expensive and might not exactly find vegetables or fruits as fresh as in traditional Correct pronoun usage
that
shops
. Another example of the advantages that people cannot get in traditional Use synonyms
markets
is that hypermarkets will not offer as friendly as in there and provide personal service like in small Use synonyms
shops
. To improve Use synonyms
this
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situation
, we are able to promote local Use synonyms
shops
as much as possible and buy daily shopping at the nearest local shop.
To conclude, the dominance of hypermarkets in the country has a major Use synonyms
impact
on local Use synonyms
communities
. And Use synonyms
this
solution is unlikely to improve the Linking Words
situation
in the long term. Use synonyms
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