Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent on each other, while others think the modern world makes people more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In
this
modern era, the lifestyle of each individual has been changed drastically. Since sophisticated Linking Words
Technology
plays a pivotal role in the world. Certain Use synonyms
people
claim that due to advanced Use synonyms
Technology
the communication, which means dependency on each other, has been increased. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
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on
the other hand, demonstrate that it happens in vice-versa. Add the comma(s)
,on
This
passage will interpret the notion vividly.
Nowadays, Linking Words
technology
is an essential source Use synonyms
of
everyone. Indeed, it has numerous benefits. Change preposition
for
First
and foremost, it is easy for everyone to connect even from thousands of miles, in a spark of seconds. Linking Words
This
would be an added advantage to be in touch. To exemplify, time can be saved, comparing to the conventional method. Linking Words
Secondly
, due to Linking Words
technology
vastly impact globally, the trad and globalization Use synonyms
was
possible, due to which an international companies can recruiter a national employee.
Change the verb form
were
Conversely
, as aforementioned Linking Words
people
believe that, the internet has changed the individual. especially, few detrimental effects like, being alone and addition to games, social media to list a few. Which has created ramifications among family and society, and lack of conversation had caused deflection in the bond. Significantly, the brighter side would be, some esteemed social media application has been created a good reputation for Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
Replace the word
current
currently
unemployment rate is consistently increasing. Add a comma
,currently
Nevertheless
, these kinds of applications have been a major source for their revenue.
To conclude, Linking Words
Technology
has affected dependent and independent positively and negatively. In my opinion, I believe that in future the Use synonyms
technology
will be more advanced, but in present days, than dependent life, independence has a great benefit.Use synonyms
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