Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobs because of the freedom they offer. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are plenty of casual jobs as well as stable jobs. As well, there are workers looking for a place to set their foot in and stay with
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,
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or enjoy life at
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having the
job
as an option that can be changed as it suits. In
this
essay, I will go through both points of
views
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, and explain why I believe having a
job
that gives you stability might overcome the
freedom
of
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casual work. Even though
,
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working casually appears to be the best option, there is a chance that, in long term,
this
decision will be
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of
regreting
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regretting
. Is common for young adults to opt
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casual work
,
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because
this
gives them
freedom
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to stay or leave whenever they want without worry
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that
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they are leaving behind. It
also
allow
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them
time
to decide on
career
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and make mistakes as much as they can.
However
, past the
beggining
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beginning
of professional years, there is not a sustainable option, especially if you have plans of having a family in the future or if you want to have money to do things you enjoy. It can, definitely, be boring to stay at one specific
job
your whole career but the financial
serenidipty
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serendipity
serenity
that comes with
that is
far worth it. The choice of having
a
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work that keeps you calm and stable can leave your mind
of
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worrying
on
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what is needed to be done
next
to pay for your meal,
for instance
. With
time
, the need to provide for your family is bigger than the importance of feeling the
freedom
in your life. Having a profession that you have nothing to worry about, allows you more
time
to enjoy your hobbies and leisure
time
with family and friends. In conclusion, having a
full
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time
job
allows you to have the
freedom
it was once the goal, but in a different form. Being able to provide for family and yourself should always be the
first
priority.
Nevertheless
, if you are successful in your career, it can
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your way more than just that. The real liberty is to be able to do what you want in your free
time
,
such
as travelling or going out with friends without needing to count the coins to pay for it.
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