4. Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ( traditional methods of teaching versus the modern ones

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Ways of acquiring and gaining knowledge have seen a drastic change over a period of time. Before people used to go to schools and attain knowledge, and now due to many reasons and post covid
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are attending online education classes. Each of these has its own ups and downs, and later I will give my opinion on
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, were going to school and getting academic training and extracurricular activities.
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conventional way of procuring knowledge has been going on for ages.
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from the olden days when kingdoms were ruled till recent times. Going to schools to secure education is one of the best forms of receiving, as teachers can guide you personally one-on-one and will help you in the areas where you are scoring fewer marks.
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can help you easily by showing you where you are going wrong and how to correct them and by giving you easy tricks and tips to reduce those mistakes. In the
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online schooling and e-learning which has become more popular these days due to covid and many more factors.
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contemporary method of learning does have its set of own advantages and disadvantages. On the one ,hand the advantage is that the kids might not get affected by the brutal virus which has taken all over the world. They are safe and secure at home. Whilst
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not having direct interactions with their peers and mentors can lead to many problems.
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- When a student doesn't understand a particular topic or is not getting any sum to solve, the parent might help but the teacher will know how to make a pupil understand it as they have been doing it for a long time. If there is face-to-face teaching it will be easier for both the teacher, as well as, the student. To conclude, I reiterate, stating that due to the covid-19
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are preferring online or e-learning, as there are chances people whom they care about, might get infected from the deadly disease which has lead to loss of many precious lives,
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, I would be biased for direct interaction and learning methods as it has been prevailing since old times, as it helps
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to interact with each other and it will
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help in the development and shape the personality of children.
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