Now a days celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth that their achievement, and this sets a bad example to young people. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is clearly evident that celebrities are becoming more popular for their

beauty

and wealth rather than their achievements. If we look into cinema, actors are prioritizing the roles that involve

beauty

rather than a good role or a

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message. Even the cricketers are not playing to the mark to achieve something for their country,

instead

, they are concentrating more on advertisements that earn them money and bring fame to their

beauty

. In

this

day and time, actors are concentrating more on their glamour. Even the movies that portray a specific message to the public have been very few, maybe so we can count them on fingers. The more glamour they exhibit, the more popularity they gain;

this

has been a key point that many actors believe. Even the directors are portraying their stories in

this

manner to attract people.

This

is turning out to have a bad effect on young people. They are entering into a stage of dilemma that glamour and wealth are more important to earn name and popularity.

Instead

of procuring education that can help them achieve their goals, they are being diverted to the illusion that money can bring everything to them.

Additionally

, celebrities'

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through their posts

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social media is attracting

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young people to force their parents to provide them with that lifestyle. To sum up, celebrities need to convey to the youth that it is not the money and

beauty

that will bring popularity. Education needs to be given higher priority to achieve goals in life, which will help lead a successful life. Teachers in the school have to guide the students not to believe in the false interpretation and make them realize that it is not those factors that make them popular.