Lately, more and more work are done by machines instead of human. Do you think the positive impact on the development outweigh the negative impact on individuals and society?

It is commonly believed that nowadays
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number of tasks are carried out by robots rather than
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manual
operation. In my opinion, merits would fall pale in comparison to the demerits.
To begin
with,
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do not offer innovative ideas. undeniably, new ideas and thoughts are needed in order to face
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environment and
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equipment
fail to provide
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assistance. It is the human efforts and
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ability that can
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overcome
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any kind of crisis and
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challenges
challenge
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for instance
, market trends are
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constantly
changing and it becomes
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flexible situations. Another point to consider is that
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robotics
prompt unemployment in the economies. it is imperative to
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more and more machines are used human efforts find no place to
work
and eventually it can put people out of
work
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permanently
however
the machines can not put an end to
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.
on the other hand
, automation
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capacity to do massive
work
. undoubtedly,
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have the ability to
work
untiring and can provide
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results within a short span of time
although
technological gadgets require periodic
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maintenance
in order to function smoothly. To
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illustrate
, laser printers can print
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one thousand prints in 10 minutes if they are well maintained.
Hence
, machines have a higher rate of productivity. In conclusion, demerits like lack of ideas dominate over the merits of machine uses.
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