Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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including interests and
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for
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. They generally believe that asking these
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might be easy to judge the
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loyalty towards the organisation. Some people agree
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these
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and many are not in
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of
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questions
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Employers
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ask marital status
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generally to
women
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applicants
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to get an idea about their future holidays and commitment
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the company. There are many cases in sales type of jobs where married
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are not
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preferred
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employers
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believe that married
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can
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commit
fully and eventually can not meet the desired targets.
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itself
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they are been rejected even if they have
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caliber
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to do that
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the
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perspective,
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are useful and relevant because they get an idea about the
applicants
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. If
any
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applicant is more involved
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hobbies
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quit past jobs due to
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concluded by tagging them as "non-fit" for the future company as well.
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, these
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are not really relevant for any
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interview
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. No one can make a decision to hire or
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not
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based on
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questions
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. The major factor for
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applicants
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is to crack the
interview
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with their
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and not with their marital status or
hobbies
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. There are different relevant factors which are more important than
hobbies
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such
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as education, past experience, salary expectations, skills and knowledge about the subject, etc. But, these days
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interview
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mainly includes asking about
hobbies
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and other personal information. In my opinion, these personal details are not applicable for any
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interviews.
Instead
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, other major factors are more important to crack any
interview
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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