A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter: * explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum * describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful * give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear Director, I am writing

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letter in response to the information I received from

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apply

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word of mouth that you are looking for a volunteer to work at the museum. I am keen to grab

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opportunity because my summer vacations are going on and I would like to indulge myself in an activity

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of scrolling over Facebook throughout the day.

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, I am doing

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in history which interests me more to take up

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offer.

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, my abilities

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a people's person and excellence in remembering historical facts are something that can be best utilized for

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volunteership

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volunteers

program. I would like to express my availability from

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week to work for 4 hours

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a day. I can take up the morning shift for the weekdays. If my application interests you please give me a call at +6578675434. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Rachel Green

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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155 words

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Enthusiastic
Volunteer
Part-time
Unpaid work
Museum director
Skills and qualities
Customer service
Organization
Team player
Flexible
Reliable
Positive attitude
Availability
Professional goals
Community contribution
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