When asked to choose between a life without work and working most of the time, people would always choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.
Throughout history,
people
spend
most of their time working as it is the only legitimate option for survival. Many, Wrong verb form
have spent
however
, think that if a person had a choice of working or not, he would opt for the second option. In this
essay, I will explain why I feel that it is a wrong assumption and prove my point of view with examples.
A notion about boring and routine work prevails among the majority of the population. Nevertheless
, considering that most of the people
’s time is dedicated to working, for many it is a matter of life to have a suitable job, that is
why they are looking for a job until it would appeal to them and bring them joy and fulfilment. Mostly creative people
, like bloggers on YouTube, are constantly searching for new content and new subscribers because they are motivated and inspired by their profession. Therefore
, there is no reason why they abandon working life.
Despite that, many people
may vote in favour of working because of the community that surrounds them. The job allows us to find people
who have similar interests that, in turn, make the bond between people
stronger. Programmers in IT companies, for instance
, besides
working at the same place, also
gather for
Change preposition
to
participation
in various competitions even in their spare time. Replace the word
participate
This
has a profound influence on lives, perhaps without work, you may hardly find such
people
.
In conclusion, although
people
while
thinking about work feel upset and stress, for many others it is a great way to improve life and meet new people
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