You have recently been in a sports centre and noticed some issues in the changing rooms. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the centre and say – What was the problem? – Explain why it is bothering you. – Suggest a possible solution.
Dear Mr Smith
The reason I am writing to you is to express my concerns about the change made in the rooms.
To begin
with, I have gone to the "ABC" gym for 5 years, and the main reason I adore it is because of its convenient cabins. To be honest, I was shocked and overwhelmed when I saw that there are no men and women sectors anymore. Members were used to being separate, and it is what the world aims for. But now, everything is different. I did not even notice any wall so that members of the gym would not see each other.
Secondly
, it is so inconvenient for men, because girls take so long while
using a hair dryer or changing clothes. On the other hand
, ladies feel insecure and furious among boys, and I fully understand it. Moreover
, there are just too many people that it feels overcrowded.
To sum up
, I would like you to take some measures and get back the old rooms. I am not the one person who does not like such
modifications. Thank you in advance.
I look forward to your reply
KseniiaSubmitted by ksrnnn on
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- Yours faithfully,
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- Yours sincerely,
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- Best regards,
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