Nowadays, most children prefer to spend several hours playing with electronic devices over doing more traditional leisure activities. What problem does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words.

In today's era

young

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generation prefer to spend time

by

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playing

games

on computers and mobile phones and pay very

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little

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attention to traditional leisure activities. In the following paragraphs, I will explain

about

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the repercussions of playing electronic

games

and how

this

problem can be solved by giving certain solutions.

Firstly

, overuse of electronic devices

have

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an adverse effect on

children

's health as

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sitting in the wrong posture and playing

games

whole

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day possibly causes back problems.

Moreover

,

this

is the root cause of

children

's obesity and weak eyesight.

For instance

, a child starts playing

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the game

a game

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game

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games

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and while playing he feels

hunger

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and starts eating junk and

then

again resume his

game

with no physical activity.

Secondly

, if

this

situation will remain the same

then

there will be no bond between

parents

and

children

. Because youngsters like to play

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game

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games

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and get involved in that play so much that it weakens the bond with the

parents

. So, to deal with the situation,

parents

should devote some time to their offspring by keeping aside their work. They should try to

explain

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their

children

that what are the benefits of doing physical activities. Apart from

this

, there is need of the hour that in school some competitions should be organised related to traditional leisure activities so that a child develops his interest in that

game

.

For example

, If in the school

a

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competition is organised

then

definitely students will take part in that activity and to perform well they will practice it after

schools

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as well.

Likewise

, their interest will be developed and in

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if

parents

motivates

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them

then

their confidence will boost up. After some days

children

will find change in themselves and will start avoiding electronic

games

. To conclude, I would like to say that even electronic

games

can develop the mental ability of players as in the case of crossword, puzzles but overuse of anything leads to bad consequences.

Therefore

,

parents

should give attention to their younger ones that what they are doing in daily life and should light the path with the right guidance.