Nowadays, most children prefer to spend several hours playing with electronic devices over doing more traditional leisure activities. What problem does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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generation prefer to spend time

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playing

games

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on computers and mobile phones and pay very

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attention to traditional leisure activities. In the following paragraphs, I will explain

about

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the repercussions of playing electronic

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and how

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problem can be solved by giving certain solutions.

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, overuse of electronic devices

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an adverse effect on

children

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's health as

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sitting in the wrong posture and playing

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whole

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day possibly causes back problems.

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,

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is the root cause of

children

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's obesity and weak eyesight.

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, a child starts playing

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the game

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game

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games

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and while playing he feels

hunger

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and starts eating junk and

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again resume his

game

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with no physical activity.

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, if

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situation will remain the same

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there will be no bond between

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and

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. Because youngsters like to play

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the game

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game

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games

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and get involved in that play so much that it weakens the bond with the

parents

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. So, to deal with the situation,

parents

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should devote some time to their offspring by keeping aside their work. They should try to

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their

children

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that what are the benefits of doing physical activities. Apart from

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, there is need of the hour that in school some competitions should be organised related to traditional leisure activities so that a child develops his interest in that

game

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.

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, If in the school

a

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competition is organised

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definitely students will take part in that activity and to perform well they will practice it after

schools

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as well.

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, their interest will be developed and in

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this

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if

parents

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motivates

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them

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their confidence will boost up. After some days

children

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will find change in themselves and will start avoiding electronic

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. To conclude, I would like to say that even electronic

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can develop the mental ability of players as in the case of crossword, puzzles but overuse of anything leads to bad consequences.

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,

parents

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should give attention to their younger ones that what they are doing in daily life and should light the path with the right guidance.