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Social Media websites have amassed large user bases. Do the advantages of being a part of a social media site outweigh the disadvantages?

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Have you seen
this
 new application? A question that we all have been asked . Social Media surrounded us in every aspect of our life.Of ,course there are many benefits of being part of
this
 enormous world ,
such
 as learning new skills, talking to a friend, and knowing the world's news .
On the other hand
, there is a possibility to waste your time on something worthless ,or the risk of being isolated from society .In my opinion , the advantages are higher than the disadvantages. What a great opportunity to be part of a huge social and having the ability to get in touch with anyone with one click .
In addition
 , if you want to learn how to cook or how to dance
for instance
 you can watch a video on youtube and be professional .
However
 , If the user can not manage his time , he will waste his time because there are a lot of options on the internet and lots of new applications every day .
Consequently
 ,
that is
 going to create a whole world for each one and
as a result
 that will create distance between one family who share the same roof . In conclusion , there are lots of benefits to the progress of social media ,and we should take advantage of it and enjoy ourselves with
such
 great benefits.
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