Some people think that students benefit from going to private secondary schools. Others however, feel that private secondary schools can have a negative effect on society as a whole. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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from private secondary

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is beneficial. The question is to whether that it has some negative

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on

society

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is an interesting issue, upon which opinion varies greatly.

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essay will outline the compelling reasons to show the positive and negative

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of private

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with, there are many advantages of private

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children

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, various types of

facilities

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are offered by these

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, best building infrastructures, labs, pick and drop from home by bus and so on.

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standard is provided, which is too good for the

children

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’s

future

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to secure their personal and professional life.

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, the introduction of

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in

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of delivery helps

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to learn

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of computer at

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age.

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, some

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think that private

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education

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affect

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society

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in

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negative way.

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amount of

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is given as a donation to secure the admission and it creates

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imbalance between the societies.

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, only affluent

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can afford to send their

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to

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private

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, the study pattern can

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from government

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and it may not give appropriate

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. Simultaneously, the strict schedules and extra subjects add

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burden

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to the student. An

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would be mandatory learning of classical languages like Sanskrit or Greek at private

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. To conclude, it can be said that private secondary

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learning has both positive and negative sides.

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, it depends on the individual what they would like to advocate. Trang While going to private

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is thought that necessary for

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, others believe that these types of schoolhouses can have a negative effect on

society

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. In the following essay, I will discuss both of these views. On the one hand, some humans think that independent colleges affect

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society

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in

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harmful way.

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, only wealthy

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have enough

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to give their

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children

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to nonpublic

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because the tuition fees are too high which is a

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to average and low

families

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to let their kids

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in. And that reason leads to many consequences, the gap between rich and poor is more widened because of the lack of social contacts in the middle of upmarket classes and

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from low economic status.

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, affluent guys who lose their teaching may criticize and treat others as inferiors and it is the factors that make destitute pupils feel upset, unconfident about themselves and their backgrounds.

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, personal universities with strict schedules and extra subjects

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as German language lessons or instruments lessons and so on that add the

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to the student.

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, giving schoolers

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confidential

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has many advantages.

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, various sorts of educational

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and

equipments

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equipment

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are provided.

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, modern laboratories with a dozen of substances, luxurious library with

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, etc.

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, an

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standard is better than

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an ordinary school

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schools

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.

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are taught by professional

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who come from different countries that help them create

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, with

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strict rules, kids have to learn extra subjects like talent

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and language

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which play an important role to broaden

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knowledge.

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many

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said that the rate of successful student’s in these kinds of

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are higher in many countries. In conclusion, my firm conviction is that giving

students

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to private

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is a fantastic idea.

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it has some negative

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, it still provides

children

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all the most wonderful abilities to develop

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, find out their talents and lead them to success. Trong Some

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say that private

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bring many

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to

students

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, but there are still opinions about the harm they can bring. Today I'm going to dig into the pros and cons of it. Private

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offer many

benefits

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. The

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is that the quality of

education

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is better than in an ordinary

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. To be operational, a private

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has to go through a lot of testing and testing, and often. High-quality

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and an effective curriculum are

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bright spots compared to public

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, the

facilities

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are better. Because it is a private

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, the equipment is purchased directly by the

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from its own fund. Unlike public

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, which have to wait for permission and

money

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from the government, renovation of private

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facilities

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is faster.

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as two sides of the coin. Private

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have negative things. Typical is the problem of bullying and discrimination among

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with good resumes often look down on others because they think

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can do everything even if it's bad. The main reason for

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the gap between rich and poor among

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. To get into a private

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, you need to pay a lot of

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. For most, that's not a problem, but for

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that don'

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have a lot of

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, it's a financial

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result

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, these

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often have low self-esteem in front of their peers and become targets of bullying. In summary, private

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bring many

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, but there are

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negative

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. The best we can do is pay more attention to our

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the only option you have. Bao Private

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from public

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is the place which we can feel so comfortable . It brings a pleasant learning environment to

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be limited in several aspects .

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of all ,

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want to go to private

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the complex compulsory like state

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. From those things , they can easily be negative effect by many factors .

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, they always play truant , skip classes , don'

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even they organise fighting , rapping and using narcotics . Those things could

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their level of study is very low .

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system, parents hold the choice to send their

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to private secondary

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which can bring advantages for their

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, some

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differently. In

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essay, I will delve into the pros and cons of private secondary

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, while they bring some great

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, they

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contribute several drawbacks to

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society

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. On the positive side,

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private

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offer better quality teaching than public

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. With international

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,

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can be

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reached

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with high qualified

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who can help them to receive more useful knowledge and most of these

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have smaller classroom

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so the pupils can have more individual attention from

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, they become confident and get

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higher

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, various types of modern

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to encourage learning on

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of technology gadgets to search for resources, best building infrastructures, labs to serve for exploration and research.

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that, with most private

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focusing more on the use of

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language,

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were able to develop better communication skills and could be helpful for their

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, due to the expensive tuition fees, only

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with wealthy and rich parents can afford to send their

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to private institutions. The

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tend to compare with each other on owning

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luxurious branded items like bags and shoes. And

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result

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, they fall back with their studies.

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also

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bridges a gap between the

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in private and public

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when

children

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from rich

families

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have a better

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environment and a higher success rate,

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with poor backgrounds will find it difficult to compete with them and give up. From that point, it leads to the disparity between the rich and the poor in

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conclusion,

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private secondary

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have both positive and negative sides.

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, it is up to the individuals to decide which environment is better for their

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