1. Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Placing
elderly
Correct article usage
the elderly
to
Nursing Change preposition
in
Homes
is becoming a trend for many people
where they do not necessarily take care
of them at home
anymore. This
issue would contain two sides in contrast
. Therefore
, in this
paper
I will argue the benefits the seniors would be better Add a comma
,paper
putting
in Change the form of the verb
put
care
homes
and its drawbacks about that.
First
of all, nursing homes
are one of the best options for looking after the elderly rather than keeping them at home
. Not only do they have excellent facilities and professional nurses to take care
of them, but also
, this
place is safer than at their home
alone. For instance
, many elderly people
had an accident
slip in the bathroom because their family could not oversee them for 24 hours or the stairs would be the riskiest spot for them. Replace the word
accidental
Besides
, the elderly would be happy to meet other elderly and do activities together, e.g., sharing life stories, doing sports and fitness activities for older people
together, and many more.
Secondly
, even though senior homes
are reliable for caring for the elderly, not all cities provide excellent senior home
facilities. In small towns, for instance
, there are several care
homes
which
have poor facilities and unfriendly nurses. Correct pronoun usage
that
This
phenomenon causes some older people
to think they are abandoned by their family
. At the same time, their families lose the opportunity to spend much more time with their parents or grandparents. In some cases, they let older Fix the agreement mistake
families
people
die in nursing homes
.
In conclusion, I believe not all older people
dislike living in care
homes
, but in my opinion, taking care
of them for the rest of their time is an attempt to return the favour where they had raised their child or relatives in the past.Submitted by firdarasyi96 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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