The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the most efficient ways to make amends

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road difficulties is to persuade people living in

suburb

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areas to move

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cities

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, urbanization brings more traffic problems to

cities

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. Urbanization means there will be more vehicles in the

cities

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as people from different age groups will need to move around together.

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migration will affect negatively

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the present state due to the increased vehicle usage.

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, most

cities

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are unable to control the consequences of that.

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, if the government makes legal statements about letting the local citizens moving into the

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,

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it is the government’s responsibility to handle the congestion of roads.

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, complications may arise.

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,

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will not be a good approach for a remedy.

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kind of initial barrier will not prevent

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traffic congestion. More importantly, letting the rural natives being settled in

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will exacerbate the situation. Noise pollution is more likely to occur.

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, the majority of people living in

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will be more deflated knowing about

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migration.

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increased population will have

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impact

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new recruitments in every field of job.

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,

government

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the government

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should take steps to

improving

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the usage of public transportation.

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, they should provide reasonable offers to the population.

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, they should give discount packages based on the people’s travel time and

arrival

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of destination.

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will reduce the usage of personal cars and bikes. To conclude, I strongly believe the government should take

actions

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to

developing

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road infrastructure or construction and the maintenance of public transportation.