The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the most efficient ways to make amends
of
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road difficulties is to persuade people living in
suburb
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areas to move
in
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cities
.
Firstly
, urbanization brings more traffic problems to
cities
. Urbanization means there will be more vehicles in the
cities
as people from different age groups will need to move around together.
Therefore
,
this
migration will affect negatively
on
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the present state due to the increased vehicle usage.
Also
, most
cities
are unable to control the consequences of that.
In addition
, if the government makes legal statements about letting the local citizens moving into the
cities
,
then
it is the government’s responsibility to handle the congestion of roads.
Consequently
, complications may arise.
Also
,
this
will not be a good approach for a remedy.
This
kind of initial barrier will not prevent
such
traffic congestion. More importantly, letting the rural natives being settled in
cities
will exacerbate the situation. Noise pollution is more likely to occur.
Hence
, the majority of people living in
cities
will be more deflated knowing about
further
migration.
This
increased population will have
serious
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impact
for
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new recruitments in every field of job.
On the other hand
,
government
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the government
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should take steps to
improving
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the usage of public transportation.
Moreover
, they should provide reasonable offers to the population.
For example
, they should give discount packages based on the people’s travel time and
arrival
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of destination.
Hence
,
this
will reduce the usage of personal cars and bikes. To conclude, I strongly believe the government should take
actions
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to
developing
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road infrastructure or construction and the maintenance of public transportation.
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