The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most efficient ways to make amends
of
road difficulties is to persuade people living in Change preposition
for
suburb
areas to move Replace the word
suburban
in
Change preposition
to
cities
.
Firstly
, urbanization brings more traffic problems to cities
. Urbanization means there will be more vehicles in the cities
as people from different age groups will need to move around together. Therefore
, this
migration will affect negatively on
the present state due to the increased vehicle usage. Change preposition
apply
Also
, most cities
are unable to control the consequences of that. In addition
, if the government makes legal statements about letting the local citizens moving into the cities
, then
it is the government’s responsibility to handle the congestion of roads. Consequently
, complications may arise. Also
, this
will not be a good approach for a remedy. This
kind of initial barrier will not prevent such
traffic congestion. More importantly, letting the rural natives being settled in cities
will exacerbate the situation. Noise pollution is more likely to occur. Hence
, the majority of people living in cities
will be more deflated knowing about further
migration. This
increased population will have serious
impact Add an article
a serious
for
new recruitments in every field of job.
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on
On the other hand
, government
should take steps to Add an article
the government
improving
the usage of public transportation. Change the verb form
improve
Moreover
, they should provide reasonable offers to the population. For example
, they should give discount packages based on the people’s travel time and arrival
of destination. Add an article
the arrival
Hence
, this
will reduce the usage of personal cars and bikes.
To conclude, I strongly believe the government should take actions
to Fix the agreement mistake
action
developing
road infrastructure or construction and the maintenance of public transportation.Change the verb form
develop
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