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These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays, there are more and more mothers
work
 outside and fathers take care of their children at home. From my point of view, several reasons and some positive development could be taken to
this
 phenomenon. For one thing, technology development makes
women
 could finish more jobs which could only do by
men
 in the past. In
this
 case,
women
 have the opportunity to have more income than
men
. For another, in the modern city, there are several works that help a woman have enough money to raise a family. So, these kinds of jobs lead more and more
women
 to
work
 outside and free
men
 in the
work
 that to take care of children at home.
Therefore
,
this
 situation has advantaged
women
 who want been financial support at home and for the
men
 who want to companion their children as full-time parents. One of them is that
this
 phenomenon could develop the gender quality which liberates and break the routine gender between housework and job. By doing
this
 in the way,
this
 situation leads to a favourable gender quality for parents. In conclusion, several reasons make mothers
work
 outside while fathers been the full-time fathers that have several positive developments.
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