Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academic achievement. Discuss both sides & give your opinion. Write at least 250 words.
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Nowadays, every
school
and institution prefers for students
to wear the uniforms. Some people believe that it provides safety for students
when playing on the ground, and also
reduces socioeconomic disparities, and encourages children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes, and other people believe that it has the wrong effect on their individuality, has no positive effect on behavior
and academic achievement. In Change the spelling
behaviour
this
essay, I will discuss both the views and explain with examples.
To begin
with, the positive impact on the pupils. It is the help of uniforms that easily identify the students
of that school
, and also
create equality in school
not the difference between rich and poor students
. It is the benefit of their being easily focused on their studies rather than clothes. For example
, It is schools play a major role in the students
becoming good citizens in the future because they have to teach only how to learn in a better way and perform well rather than create any socioeconomic disparities.
On the other hand
, some people think it is
a negative impact on their behaviour and achievement. because they did not right to express their individuality and did not show their standard for their clothes and money. Verb problem
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For instance
, in this
, Rich parents want to their children wears
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a
branded Correct article usage
apply
cloths
and show their status in Correct your spelling
clothes
school
.
In conclusion, Uniforms are provided equailty
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equally
in
all the Change preposition
to
students
. In my opinion
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opinion,
students
are only concerate
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concerned
on
their studies and Change preposition
with
get
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getting
the
good marks because they will future of Correct article usage
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the nation
a nation
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- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
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