You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost

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Dear sir or madam, My name is Amar Sharma, CEO of WOIR Software. I am writing

this

letter with regard to queries around my participation in the seminar and showcasing recent product launches by our company. Since it will be an international journey for me and I have never been to London earlier , I have few additional queries apart from the information provided by you over an introductory email. What are the starting and ending dates for the event? Does the program have a provision to showcase non-IT products

also

? Do you provide the accommodation to the participants or do I it is that I need to have my own arrangements? An idea on how much it will cost for me including event fees, lunches and evening snacks for all the days in the package provided by you? It would be great if you could provide me with the above information around two weeks prior to the event. Yours faithfully, Amar Sharma

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