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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are some good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #animals #zoos
The greatness of a nation can be
jugded
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judged
 by how people treat the
animals
 of their country. Lots of stock believe that wild
animals
 should not
kept
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 in zoos. While
,
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 some thinks that there are goods for having
zoo's
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zoos
zoo
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. As the extinction occurs rapidly, it is my opinion to protect the
animals
 by keeping them in
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the zoo
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zoo
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.
To begin
 with, zoos has many
advantage
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 associated with it . The main logic of
zoo
 is to conserve the
animals
 from bad human acts and nowadays, species are disappearing, so it is
responsibility
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 to preserve them.
However
, some
beast
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 are dangerous for
human
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a human
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being
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, by keeping them in
zoo
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 prevents
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many
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any
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accident
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.
Nevertheless
, they save energy as they
donot
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do not
don't
 need to do efforts for food.
For instance
, United Kingdom (Uk) shares the data of saving huge pandas by caring
them
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 in
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the zoo
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zoo
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zoos
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.
Furthermore
,
individual
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individuals
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 obtain knowledge about all the exotic
animals
at
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in
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 one place only and they do not need to travel
many
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spot
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spots
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 to see them .
In addition
,
tourist
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a tourist
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 from other nation comes to visit
zoo
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the zoo
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. Consider the example, in
year
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 2013 Mysore
zoo
 - special
zoo
 for exotic
animals
 was most visited place by tourist other
then
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 visiting any destination.
On the contrary
, there are numerous drawbacks
also
 which can never be neglect The main is
animals
 are supposed to be not connected to nature but
also
, they are restricted to do things according to them.
Moreover
, they even
donot
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do not
don't
 have enough space for roaming and
it's affects
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the
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 mental health. As
a
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proof,
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a zoo
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zoo
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zoos
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 in
meghalaya
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are
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 not really well preserved and developed, because of the humid weather of
meghalaya
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,
huge
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a huge
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 number of
animals
 are die daily as they are not able to survive in
such
 type of harsh
condition
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. In conclusion,
this
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support
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more
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the more
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 positive influence of having
zoo
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a zoo
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.
Animals
 should be protected in
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the zoo
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zoo
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zoos
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, but the condition is
behavior
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 with them must be polite
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