Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

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Is it possible to attain the desired target and handsome salary without attending the educational institutes? Some folks have had always been questioned about

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. Personally, I believe there are some tools that can help a person to get success in his life which are explained in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.

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with, extremely hard work and full dedication can assist the folks to achieve the desired target.

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, mankind' history is full of these kinds of examples where we have to admit that achievements do not confine to the school buildings. Albert Einstein,

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, was a remarked scientist who facilitates the world with electricity by inventing

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electric bulb; he had been thrown out of his school because of his abnormal thinking and behaviour and he turned to be a successful scientist by the passing years.

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, success depends on several factors which is irrelevant to schools. Moving

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, there are some fields like teaching and medical care facilities where on-campus practices and education is compulsory to perform well.

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, without having enough experience and knowledge, no one can operate on the human body in order to save someone's life.

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, education is highly recommended in those areas where others' live involved. To conclude

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, undoubtedly, some people who are not good at the schooling' grade could achieve their goals by fully dedication and die-core hard work;

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, medicine and teaching professions cannot be served without having adequate knowledge and experience.

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A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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246 words

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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

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Some people think that illegal Internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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