You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Peter, I hope you are doing well. I am glad that you have taken the decision

finally

, as you know driving is a very crucial skill in day-to-day life. It will make your life easier and comfortable, it will help you to commute easily from your house to college and from college to your workplace. As you know, I was living in Niagara Falls for 1 year, and I learned to drive from Saint Mary driving school. It is the best and cheapest as well, and focus on your mistakes and improve them in the meantime. Because I am your friend and I want to give some advice to you about school and driving in Canada.

This

school has a long waiting list, please apply in advance and pay their fees as well only by credit card. The alcohol percentage is one of the strict rules in Niagara Falls, so please don't drink and drive. I am there if you need any help and you can call me as well, my number is 9053247889. Best wishes, VANDANA

Submitted by Vanurajput22 on Sun Jan 21 2024

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

178 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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