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Band 5.5

Some people think that public libraries are not necessary whereas others believe that they are essential for people. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Owing to modern technologies, it is common that
libraries
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 are losing their importance as some
people
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 think while I believe that
libraries
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 have still the same value as they used to. Here, I will illustrate my views in favour of
libraries
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. I consider that books and
libraries
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 have their own importance which others stuff can't a replica of it
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 books help to build up concentration which is hard via
internet
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 or google while reading any book.
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, in the
libraries
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, there are a lot of public so there is a good way to get interaction with other
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 which is not possible at home or through the
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.
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, few things which are hard to find out on the
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 are easily available in
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.
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, in some rural ,areas it's hard to get access to the
internet
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 so
libraries
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 are more beneficial for them. On the one hand, some
people
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 think that modernisation brought up drastic change in human beings life
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internet
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 has become the priority of life now as it is very convenient and easily available anywhere.
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,
people
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 don't have time to go to
libraries
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 these days so they prefer to use a kindle or many apps which provides the same information and knowledge which a library can
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 they could save time and energy. Adding to
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,
libraries
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 are not easily available whenever someone needs to read something or to get some kind of information so in
this
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 ,case it's hard to get access to the library anywhere. Overall,
libraries
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 are an ornament of any of the countries where we can find peace and a vast ocean of knowledge and information as well
internet
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 and other sources are equally contributing to run all these
libraries
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.
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