. You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter: • tell your friend what the event was • explain why you think your friend would like the event • invite them to come to the event with you

Dear Rai, I am writing

this

letter to inform you about an interesting event that I recently visited.

This

is a handloom exhibition with a variety of traditional clothes that are extremely smart and trendy. I feel you should be visiting

this

. Let me explain in more detail. In

this

, exhibition you will get numerous fabrics from various parts of India.

Moreover

, all of them are hand woven;

thus

, they are of superior quality. Apart from that, you will

also

get various colour options. In the evening, they organize shows to showcase their products as well as to make people aware of the latest change in fashion.

Also

, there is a provision for getting consultation from well-known designers. Henceforth, I believe you should check

this

place, as it has all the things that you admire. I am planning to again go there

this

weekend. I suggest, if you do not have any plan can we make a plan together? Please let me know your thoughts. I look forward to hearing from you. Your Friend, Shreya

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

175 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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