You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to study • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to expose to you all my dissatisfaction with my current lodge and to request my replacement for a more convenient accommodation for me. I have been living here for about two years because I am studying Marketing Business,
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, I work part-time every day. I would say that I used to appreciate
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place because here I had a peaceful and well-located space where I lived properly.
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,
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spring, my other roommate was graduated and I need to share the room with another colleague. While the
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one was completely polite and calm, the new one loves loud songs and he usually plays video games with friends until late at night. Unfortunately, I cannot be focused on my assignments because our ambience is noisy and disorganized. On top of that, I am feeling very tired during my job due to the fact that I have been sleeping very badly. I would demand you a
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chamber in the same building where I live right now. I would share with a person who respects the good rules of coexistence. Preferably ,
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who studies and works
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I do. Please, contact me and let me know how you intend to resolve
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problem. Yours faithfully, Mike Smith.
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