Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed in because of technology . In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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health problem .
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mobile phone and other gadgets ,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology
  • interact
  • relationships
  • connectivity
  • communication
  • online
  • face-to-face
  • friendships
  • romantic relationships
  • family dynamics
  • positive
  • negative
  • development
  • effects
  • formation
  • ease
  • impacts
  • communities
  • connect
  • interaction
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