Today foods travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

In the present day with the advance of technologies

has been

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increasingly popular

food

make

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a long journey

until

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arrive at people`s

home

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homes

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. Large

manufactories

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manufacturers

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are expanding their business around

of

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the whole country which

possibility

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reach

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a huge number of people.

This

essay will discuss why long travels happen and why

this

negative trend can lead to many consequences in the long term. Big and famous companies can reach and influence tons of individuals,

consequently

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the more people they persuade, the more individuals will be interested in the

service

of the companies.

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, is very arduous for small

business

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businesses

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compete

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with

this

kind of

service

that

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leads to

population

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the population

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buy

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food

in big supermarkets rather than promoting the local

service

.

For example

, when consumers choose to buy at large supermarkets, generally foods are imported from far cities resulting in local

food

being devalued.

Therefore

, the population should be more aware of local

service

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services

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, prioritizing and helping small businesses. But, why

this

trend has a negative impact on society? Because

the

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long travel is one of the responsible causes for the impact of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere. The farther away will be the distance, the more polluted gases released into the air.

In addition

, these gases are responsible for climate

changes

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around the world. Thinking with collective thoughts,

ideas

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can help not only me but

also

my society, which is a huge step

to ameliorate

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toward ameliorating

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our community

to

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for

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the next generations.

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, it is important

both

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to both

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promote the local

service

and use cars less. In conclusion, the population can have healthy nutrition by consuming local

food

.

Moreover

, they will help both sides, the environment and de small business.

This

essay argued about why foods make long travels and why

this

is a negative trend.