Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays, concentration issues are increasing in students. There are various reasons behind that
such
as hard curriculum, harsh schedule, mischievous behavior
. I will discuss Change the spelling
behaviour
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the cause
cause
in detail and some Change the form of the verb
causes
solution
.
There is no doubt that young kids paying less attention at school. The main cause is strict curriculum, Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
for instance
, school
have more practical subjects than art and paintings. Today, most of Fix the agreement mistake
schools
institutions
just focus on Add an article
the institutions
technological
, scientific, and mathematical program, which make the Add an article
the technological
more tough
, there Replace the words
tougher
seem
no space or Change the verb form
seems
time
for artwork and game period. Moreover
, today children have the all-day tight time
table like seven to eight hours at school, after that
they have fully packed homework which they have to finish in the evening, Add a comma
,that
therefore
they don’t get time
play at home. This
makes them start avoiding study and do other activities
such
as play games, watch movies or TV. They prefer more fun and hilarious moments because it is their childhood.
There are some effective solutions to resolve this
issue. Schools should add some other creative activities
in curriculum
, some games and outdoor Add an article
the curriculum
activities
which make them more active, so they can give more time
to study. Along with, teachers should divide the homework of subjects into weekdays, for
example
Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday half subjects, Thursday, Friday and Saturday half subject; by Add the comma(s)
,example
this
they can get Sunday free for fun and relax. Add a comma
,this
However
, parents should provide more emotional support to their young ones and help them in
their homework, projects and assignments.
In conclusion, Change preposition
with
although
this
is necessary to have knowledge about world
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the world
but
other Remove the conjunction
apply
activities
also
play a vital role in younger’s life because he/she feel
more relax after these leisure Change the verb form
feels
activities
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