In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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number of local

stores

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closing due to the fact that shoppers are choosing to buy in bigger places, even though they need to travel a larger distance for that.

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, for the closing

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that is

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a drawback, from the customer point of view

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is unavoidable. With a growing community,

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comes different shopping options, which in long term is more beneficial. Buying from small local

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is becoming less common,

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, there is still the need to go to local

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, to buy immediate essentials, a medicine that

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is unpredictable to be needed or a food missed from a recipe that will be made before the

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big shopping. There is

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a concern that

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with those

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the economy will

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lower business numbers and decimated

money

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rotation.

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, the small buys made

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local shops are not enough to sustain them there. People are inclined to go shopping once a month and buy their needs in a mall

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of going to the

neighborhood

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shop more often

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and spend

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and time there. Despite the considerably less

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spent whilst shopping in one store at a big centre, the temptation to spend

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, non-essential items, are more likely to happen.

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, going to a supermarket inside a mall

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gives you plenty of visual incentives to

browse

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for clothes, house items and other appliances that

was

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not on the original shopping list. Researches

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shown that the replacement in kitchen appliances has increased 20% in houses where people choose to buy in shopping centres. In conclusion, the fact that

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people are opting to go shop in large centres has more advantages than trying to maintain small

stores

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functioning. The alternative for

those small business

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that small business

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to survive from closing is

migrate

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to

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of providing services,

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as, online business or selling their items to those large companies.